The song was a bit repetetive, though your melodies were actually quite cool, a little variation and dynamics goes a long way.
The saw lead made things a little more interesting (good work with the filter), but I had to wait till half way through the song for it to kick in.
Drumwork fit the song well. Perhaps a few small fills in places to liven things up?
All in all the song isnt bad, but it isnt really good either. I have heard so many generic fruity-tracks with the exact same instruments and repetetivness.. Fruityloops can own, but in many cases it just encourages simple, pattern orientated music.
Best of luck with future works.
I like it. I would suggest giving the song a bit of an EQ to touch it up.
The melody segments fit together well, all up its very happy sounding.
The only thing I dont like is the (distorted?) bell sound- it just doesnt work with my ears, and the transition to the next melody is a little rough.
Very cool track.
Drumwork was particularly good and all the instruments all meshed together really well.
The song was dynamic enough to maintain my intrest and it loops well, too.
Its enough to get me to check out more of your work, anyway.
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